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#516946 | Mon - Apr 6 2009 - 17:06:57
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Need someone to look over my 2 papers for grammar, comma use, and other general problems like particulate verbs/etc

Anyone willing to help msg me on aim pliz and thx
 
#516947 | Mon - Apr 6 2009 - 17:07:23
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watch yer comma splices
 
#516948 | Mon - Apr 6 2009 - 17:09:25
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msword does wonders with grammar probs
 
#516952 | Mon - Apr 6 2009 - 17:11:31
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Quote (deadhXc @ Apr 6 2009 - 17:09:25)
msword does wonders with grammar probs


suck at comma splices
 
#516955 | Mon - Apr 6 2009 - 17:14:15
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dot your t's and cross your i's
 
#516959 | Mon - Apr 6 2009 - 17:16:43
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Quote (BBQ @ Apr 6 2009 - 18:11:31)
Quote (deadhXc @ Apr 6 2009 - 17:09:25)
msword does wonders with grammar probs


suck at comma splices


yeah
 
#516975 | Mon - Apr 6 2009 - 17:33:40
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hey, i remember high school
GOOD LUCK M8!
 
#516976 | Mon - Apr 6 2009 - 17:36:18
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Quote (blind_chief @ Apr 6 2009 - 18:33:40)
hey, i remember high school
GOOD LUCK M8!


I hope your diaper breaks.
 
#516977 | Mon - Apr 6 2009 - 17:36:24
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when are you handing it in?

the old lady is an english major
 
#516978 | Mon - Apr 6 2009 - 17:36:31
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Quote (smoked @ Apr 6 2009 - 15:36:18)
Quote (blind_chief @ Apr 6 2009 - 18:33:40)
hey, i remember high school
GOOD LUCK M8!


I hope your diaper breaks.


lol
 
#516979 | Mon - Apr 6 2009 - 17:37:13
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Quote (cardoors32 @ Apr 6 2009 - 18:36:24)
when are you handing it in?

the old lady is an english major


Like 2 weeks, these are papers that have been graded and read by the teacher, and revised so most things should be good but dont know if i added any problems with the edits I made...
 
#517034 | Mon - Apr 6 2009 - 18:17:53
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I can revise the phrasal verb paper, just wrote one on the same topic a month or 2 back
 
#517082 | Mon - Apr 6 2009 - 18:36:23
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I'll review it!
 
#517084 | Mon - Apr 6 2009 - 18:37:42
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Quote (7_Deadly_Sins @ Apr 6 2009 - 17:36:23)
I'll review it!
LOL

 
#517086 | Mon - Apr 6 2009 - 18:38:20
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hope its an article about praobableeyly
 
#517095 | Mon - Apr 6 2009 - 18:40:40
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Gona get Dan an A!
 
#517102 | Mon - Apr 6 2009 - 18:42:59
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Quote (Animage @ Apr 6 2009 - 18:38:20)
hope its an article about praobableeyly


*artical
*proalbey
 
#517103 | Mon - Apr 6 2009 - 18:43:10
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hope its an article about praobableeyly
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#517115 | Mon - Apr 6 2009 - 18:46:12
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worst part is, i went there and copied artical and ended up typing it correctly
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