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#538424 | Wed - May 6 2009 - 13:01:19
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http://www.desolatecarnage.net/smoked/Comp...nalProject.docx

If anyone wants to read

which means I am officially done with lollege, and hope I pass
 
#538425 | Wed - May 6 2009 - 13:05:24
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gl, i'll leave the reading pleasure for the rest of DC
 
#538428 | Wed - May 6 2009 - 13:13:30
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I know better than to click that link with my phone...




But fuck it here goes nothin
 
#538443 | Wed - May 6 2009 - 13:31:36
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perfect time to start playing wow
 
#538449 | Wed - May 6 2009 - 13:56:16
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will probably read because it seems interesting but not enough time before work to read a 16 pg paper
 
#538880 | Thu - May 7 2009 - 00:27:09
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.txt PLIZ
 
#538908 | Thu - May 7 2009 - 09:42:23
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word 2007 is not present on this machine
 
#538909 | Thu - May 7 2009 - 10:04:41
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Quote (Jp. @ May 7 2009 - 10:42:23)
word 2007 is not present on this machine


livin' in the past
 
#538910 | Thu - May 7 2009 - 10:10:58
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windows 95 here
 
#538911 | Thu - May 7 2009 - 10:14:10
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Quote (blind_chief @ May 7 2009 - 11:10:58)
windows bc here


 
#538912 | Thu - May 7 2009 - 10:21:38
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i saw a film today
oh boy
the english army had just won the war
 
#538913 | Thu - May 7 2009 - 10:27:44
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going to print this out 30x and print it to the address listed for congrats
 
#538915 | Thu - May 7 2009 - 10:43:31
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Quote (BBQ @ May 7 2009 - 11:27:44)
going to print this out 30x and print it to the address listed for congrats


thats the default address for my campus, lol
 
#539075 | Thu - May 7 2009 - 18:48:42
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Quote (blind_chief @ May 7 2009 - 07:21:38)
i saw a film today
oh boy
the english army had just won the war


a crowd of people turned away
 
#539079 | Thu - May 7 2009 - 19:38:54
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Skimmed it

Not terrible but your writing style seems to include a lot of unneeded wordiness due to repetition.

Ofc I'm no professor so :donno:

Good work On the paper and congrats on finishing college etc
 
#539082 | Thu - May 7 2009 - 19:40:50
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Critiqued by a 16 year old.

gz smoked
 
#539083 | Thu - May 7 2009 - 19:42:04
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Quote (Animage @ May 7 2009 - 20:40:50)
Critiqued by a 16 year old.

gz smoked


Why does my age matter? D:
 
#539084 | Thu - May 7 2009 - 19:42:43
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Quote (Animage @ May 7 2009 - 20:40:50)
Critiqued by a 16 year old.

gz smoked


Why does my age matter? D:


Because writing styles from high school level stop mattering after high school.
 
#539089 | Thu - May 7 2009 - 20:08:34
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Quote (Jp. @ May 7 2009 - 19:42:04)
Quote (Animage @ May 7 2009 - 20:40:50)
Critiqued by a 16 year old.

gz smoked


Why does my age matter? D:


Because writing styles from high school level stop mattering after high school.


Interesting.

Remember when we were friends for that month? Was fun.
 
#539092 | Thu - May 7 2009 - 20:34:53
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Quote (Jp. @ May 7 2009 - 20:38:54)
Skimmed it

Not terrible but your writing style seems to include a lot of unneeded wordiness due to repetition.

Ofc I'm no professor so :donno:

Good work On the paper and congrats on finishing college etc


Writing style for this paper includes repitition so retards reading it will have the message sink in.

Oh wai
 
#539095 | Thu - May 7 2009 - 20:39:14
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#539096 | Thu - May 7 2009 - 20:40:21
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same


oh you
 
#539223 | Fri - May 8 2009 - 12:45:36
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Quote (Jp. @ May 7 2009 - 09:42:23)
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#539226 | Fri - May 8 2009 - 12:48:26
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Quote (lobb @ May 7 2009 - 16:48:42)
Quote (blind_chief @ May 7 2009 - 07:21:38)
i saw a film today
oh boy
the english army had just won the war


a crowd of people turned away


but i just had to look
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