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#813318 | Sun - Nov 6 2011 - 19:02:41
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y/n on reading that piece?

Also if anyone else wants to critique a short piece of writing for me let me know, it would be appreciated.
 
#813319 | Sun - Nov 6 2011 - 19:09:15
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got drunk, need to finish reading
 
#813320 | Sun - Nov 6 2011 - 19:13:35
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Quote (smoked @ Sun - Nov 6 2011 - 19:09:15)
got drunk, need to finish reading


lol k
 
#813321 | Sun - Nov 6 2011 - 19:23:01
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Quote (bubbachunk @ Sun - Nov 6 2011 - 20:02:41)
y/n on reading that piece?

Also if anyone else wants to critique a short piece of writing for me let me know, it would be appreciated.


i can help ya with content but clearly on editing....
 
#813322 | Sun - Nov 6 2011 - 19:30:53
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Quote (bubbachunk @ Sun - Nov 6 2011 - 20:02:41)
y/n on reading that piece?

Also if anyone else wants to critique a short piece of writing for me let me know, it would be appreciated.


i can help ya with content but clearly on editing....


thats all I am looking for, I can edit fairly well on my own
 
#813325 | Sun - Nov 6 2011 - 20:02:53
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Quote (bubbachunk @ Sun - Nov 6 2011 - 20:30:53)
Quote (deadhXc @ Sun - Nov 6 2011 - 19:23:01)
Quote (bubbachunk @ Sun - Nov 6 2011 - 20:02:41)
y/n on reading that piece?

Also if anyone else wants to critique a short piece of writing for me let me know, it would be appreciated.


i can help ya with content but clearly on editing....


thats all I am looking for, I can edit fairly well on my own


deadhxc@hotmail.com

This post has been edited by deadhXc on Sun - Nov 6 2011 - 20:10:34
 
#813326 | Sun - Nov 6 2011 - 20:06:50
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Quote (deadhXc @ Sun - Nov 6 2011 - 20:02:53)
Quote (bubbachunk @ Sun - Nov 6 2011 - 20:30:53)
Quote (deadhXc @ Sun - Nov 6 2011 - 19:23:01)
Quote (bubbachunk @ Sun - Nov 6 2011 - 20:02:41)
y/n on reading that piece?

Also if anyone else wants to critique a short piece of writing for me let me know, it would be appreciated.


i can help ya with content but clearly on editing....


thats all I am looking for, I can edit fairly well on my own


deadhxc@hotmail.com


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