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#538424 |
Wed - May 6 2009 - 13:01:19
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http://www.desolatecarnage.net/smoked/Comp...nalProject.docx
If anyone wants to read
which means I am officially done with lollege, and hope I pass
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Wed - May 6 2009 - 13:05:24
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gl, i'll leave the reading pleasure for the rest of DC
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Wed - May 6 2009 - 13:13:30
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I know better than to click that link with my phone...
But fuck it here goes nothin
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Wed - May 6 2009 - 13:31:36
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perfect time to start playing wow
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Wed - May 6 2009 - 13:56:16
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will probably read because it seems interesting but not enough time before work to read a 16 pg paper
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Thu - May 7 2009 - 00:27:09
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.txt PLIZ
#538908 |
Thu - May 7 2009 - 09:42:23
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word 2007 is not present on this machine
#538909 |
Thu - May 7 2009 - 10:04:41
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Quote (Jp. @ May 7 2009 - 10:42:23)
word 2007 is not present on this machine
livin' in the past
#538910 |
Thu - May 7 2009 - 10:10:58
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windows 95 here
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Thu - May 7 2009 - 10:14:10
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Quote (blind_chief @ May 7 2009 - 11:10:58)
windows bc here
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Thu - May 7 2009 - 10:21:38
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i saw a film today
oh boy
the english army had just won the war
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Thu - May 7 2009 - 10:27:44
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going to print this out 30x and print it to the address listed for congrats
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Thu - May 7 2009 - 10:43:31
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Quote (BBQ @ May 7 2009 - 11:27:44)
going to print this out 30x and print it to the address listed for congrats
thats the default address for my campus, lol
#539075 |
Thu - May 7 2009 - 18:48:42
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Quote (blind_chief @ May 7 2009 - 07:21:38)
i saw a film today
oh boy
the english army had just won the war
a crowd of people turned away
#539079 |
Thu - May 7 2009 - 19:38:54
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Skimmed it
Not terrible but your writing style seems to include a lot of unneeded wordiness due to repetition.
Ofc I'm no professor so
Good work On the paper and congrats on finishing college etc
#539082 |
Thu - May 7 2009 - 19:40:50
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Critiqued by a 16 year old.
gz smoked
#539083 |
Thu - May 7 2009 - 19:42:04
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Quote (Animage @ May 7 2009 - 20:40:50)
Critiqued by a 16 year old.
gz smoked
Why does my age matter? D:
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Thu - May 7 2009 - 19:42:43
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Quote (Jp. @ May 7 2009 - 19:42:04)
Quote (Animage @ May 7 2009 - 20:40:50)
Critiqued by a 16 year old.
gz smoked
Why does my age matter? D:
Because writing styles from high school level stop mattering after high school.
#539089 |
Thu - May 7 2009 - 20:08:34
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Quote (Jp. @ May 7 2009 - 19:42:04)
Quote (Animage @ May 7 2009 - 20:40:50)
Critiqued by a 16 year old.
gz smoked
Why does my age matter? D:
Because writing styles from high school level stop mattering after high school.
Interesting.
Remember when we were friends for that month? Was fun.
#539092 |
Thu - May 7 2009 - 20:34:53
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Quote (Jp. @ May 7 2009 - 20:38:54)
Skimmed it
Not terrible but your writing style seems to include a lot of unneeded wordiness due to repetition.
Ofc I'm no professor so
Good work On the paper and congrats on finishing college etc
Writing style for this paper includes repitition so retards reading it will have the message sink in.
Oh wai
#539095 |
Thu - May 7 2009 - 20:39:14
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Thu - May 7 2009 - 20:40:21
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same
oh you
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Fri - May 8 2009 - 12:45:36
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Quote (Jp. @ May 7 2009 - 09:42:23)
word 2007 is not present on this machine
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Fri - May 8 2009 - 12:48:26
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Quote (lobb @ May 7 2009 - 16:48:42)
Quote (blind_chief @ May 7 2009 - 07:21:38)
i saw a film today
oh boy
the english army had just won the war
a crowd of people turned away
but i just had to look
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